It was over ten years ago with a big fat Indian wedding. The newly wed
steered into the sunset to start a new life together. He attended wearing a
smile like a veneer of happiness. He needed closure. Yet the scent of this
perfume keeps bringing her back to him.
nice ending. A twist to broaden the story.
ReplyDeletethank you :)
DeleteI don't know why but when I saw that it was a Indian wedding, I immediately ran to see if it was you who wrote it. Then I started reading with an Indian accent and it made me feel more interested and immerse in the ambience of that wedding I swear I could see a clear picture of that sunset.
ReplyDeleteWhy closure when he is marring her? but then the perfume… catchy want know their history.
I enjoy how you opened the story. It took me somewhere, so I was able to imagine the situation. the description of his smile, also made me smile. I liked it.
ReplyDeletethank you. I am glad you enjoyed reading it
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