Thursday, July 10, 2014

Frozen Peas

Samantha Cable. Miami Ad School Sydney.

A sniffle,
A yelp even.
Impossible to tell.
Lost in an exasperated gasp,
Dry throat,
Noiseless.
She collapses.

The room is dim.
Fridge door off its hinges.
A light faintly glows through.
Next to an empty bottle of red,
And a ripped bag of frozen peas.

2 comments:

  1. Interesting description of a scene. Makes us wonder what happened to her. Anaphylactic shock? Poison? Asthma attack? Heart attack?

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  2. Would like to know what inspired you, it makes me curious to know.

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